Thursday, January 12, 2012

Metafiction

“Mother, Why is our world pink?” Mily asked.
“Why do you ask, Milly?” said the mother.
“Today I found a picture on the ground and we had peach skin” said Milly.
“You know, Milly, when I was in 6th grade,it happened.Do you want to know about that day Milly?” her mother said.
“Okay!” Milly exclaimed

Today is a last day of the school. All of the sixth graders said "Goodbye." Today might be the last chance to play and talk with our friends. To celebrate the graduation, we decided to have a pajama party in Do Kyung's house.

    Do Kyung's house was huge and beautiful like a castle. It had a big gate and garden full of flowers, like the house I saw in the comics. The inside of the house was more amazing. So we ran in to the house. We went to Do Kyung's room, and it was all pink! Do Kyung's room was a pink world! It was full of pink stuffs. A pink bed with pink pillow, pink dolls, pink bed, and pink wallpapers. It was all pink. They sat on a pink chair with a pink cushion. They wore pink clothes from Do Kyung's pink closet. They ate pink chocolate and drank pink orange juice in a pink cup. Time passed really fast. So, they slept in a huge pink bed all together.
    Next day, they woke up. Surprisingly, their body was turned into pink. They were astonished and screamed. "Oh My God!!!!!!!! What happened to my body?!" They ran out of the house but the whole world was also pink. They were so shocked.
   The fire was pink and the water was pink. People couldn't believe that the pink water was safe. So, nobody tried to drink the water. Long time passed and one day, an old man said "I will die anyway so, I'm going to drink the water." Then, the amazing thing happened! The old man became baby again.   So, everyone realized that this water makes people younger. Thus, many old men and women drank the pink water. They became the baby as many people expected. As the time went by, people from other place started to wondering, "Why the people from the pink world are all very young?" However, they can't find the secret and it became one of the mysteries that never solved for a long time.
"It's still kind of amazing how no one knows all this time, but I wondered if people don't get old and die, how will this society survive? Milly?" Her mother asked.
"I don't know mother, after all I'm only 9 years old..."
"Yes, of course dear, now go to sleep"
And she went of to sleep to her dreamland.

1 comment:

  1. This mom knows how to tell a weird story! But it works. Great job! Nice use of metafiction here.

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